Day 101: Recylce

So today’s task is to find something old that I had previously written and to change it into something new.

The old piece of literature that I chose was a poem written in Jan 2017 titled I dream better with my eyes open. The original poem had a more specific subject whereas the recycled version doesn’t focus on anything in particular.

Enjoy.


I dream better with my eyes open

Closing them suppresses the vision

It blurs, no distinctness, no identity

I feel more with eyes open

Touch sending shivers all over

I taste better with my eyes open

Black pepper and garlic mingling in my mouth

I hear the conversation clearer with my eyes open

Laughs rippling through my whole being

Heads tilting backwards

All the things I miss when I refuse to see

I dream better with my eyes open


Thank you for reading.

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